I think this one turned out pretty awful. I couldn't find a proper balance between line and render, realism and simplification. I over-rendered it and now it doesn't have a lot going for it.
I think the rendering is okay, the rendering on the skirt is awesome. But it is a pretty sterile affair as a whole. Maybe it's the subject choice. I think this kind of stuff works well as an exercise but maybe not as a illustration...just my two cents.
I thought it was fine before I read your comments, and now you've just got me trying to see what is wrong with it. I still don't see the 'mistake', I guess.
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I think the rendering is okay, the rendering on the skirt is awesome. But it is a pretty sterile affair as a whole. Maybe it's the subject choice. I think this kind of stuff works well as an exercise but maybe not as a illustration...just my two cents.
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I thought it was fine before I read your comments, and now you've just got me trying to see what is wrong with it. I still don't see the 'mistake', I guess.
i also think the background doesn't do it justice. Go for a darker tint and maybe something of a complementary colorscheme. I'd like to see that...
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